Part Sixteen is here...

[Rick Henry]

Part Sixteen of my ongoing fictional of what may have happened had Karen lived is now up and ready for reading. This chapter gets very heated on some heavy topics.



CLICK HERE: To read Chapter Sixteen

[Klila]

Amazing, it was a little fantasy of mine, if Karen lived.
Can you email me please? [e-mail]

Klila

[YesterdayOnceMore]

RICK, what an OUTSTANDING story. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading.

Good on you that Karen has become her own person at long, last. I'm happy to see what we all knew - that Karen is standing up for herself, especially to her own rather rude, completely uncaring mom, and to Herb, Jerry et all. Kudos to Karen for letting them know who she was and what she was about.

And, GREAT KUDOS to you, Rick. What an interesting, well written story. Can't wait to read more.

Tim

[Rick Henry]

Hi all, thanks for the nice words.

You may have noticed all the restaurants mentioned in the story are actual restaurants. I've mentioned Marri's Pizza in Long Beach, California, The Velvet Turtle in West Hollywood, CA, Hamburger Hamlet and Hard Rock Cafe both in the Santa Monica area of L.A.

In Part Sixteen I quoted both "(Caught Between) Goodbye And I Love You" and "This Masquerade".

Going back to Part Fifteen the fan's named used is actually the name is a registered member here on the forum. Anybody know who the fan is?

[YesterdayOnceMore]

IT'S BEANER!!!!!

[Rick Henry]

yesterdayoncemore said:

IT'S BEANER!!!!!

Yes, you are right again Tim. It is Mary Ann (Beaner) who sends Karen the citrus smelling potpourri in Chapter 15.

I also found it interesting that Windmills have been in the news recently. I read a lengthy article in the newspaper about windmills as an alternative source of power. I felt that was quite interesting to read this article and I actually knew a little about it from the research I did before writing Chapter 13 of this stroy which is titled "Windmills In Holland". In striving to keep this story as realistic as possible I have put in a good amount of research on many different topics. I'm learning a lot and I'm enjoying writing this.

[smoothie2]

admin said:

Hi all, thanks for the nice words.

You may have noticed all the restaurants mentioned in the story are actual restaurants. I've mentioned Marri's Pizza in Long Beach, California, The Velvet Turtle in West Hollywood, CA, Hamburger Hamlet and Hard Rock Cafe both in the Santa Monica area of L.A.

In Part Sixteen I quoted both "(Caught Between) Goodbye And I Love You" and "This Masquerade".

Going back to Part Fifteen the fan's named used is actually the name is a registered member here on the forum. Anybody know who the fan is?

???I didn't pick up about Mary Ann and the potpourri. You are the sneaky one though Rick...
I have heard of the Hard Rock Cafe and Hamb. Hamlet, and in
the back of my mind while reading it, I figured those were real places.
I did pick up the lines used from the songs, they fit in perfectly.
You do have a writing talent, and we appreciate your research.
Windmills are really a rare sight seems around where I live,
but they are vanishing icons of by-gone days. so, i am glad
they are being used once again.