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Post by Rick Henry on Aug 10, 2005 11:16:00 GMT -5
 Hi all! Just wanted to let you know I've added a part seven to my fictitious story on what if Karen lived. |
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Post by enigma on Aug 10, 2005 13:38:53 GMT -5
Just wanted to compliment you Rick on this account. Though it is ficticious you base it on accurate facts surrounding Karens solo record and certainly make it a logical and plausable scenerio it may have went very simular to what you wrote who knows. I consider this the best installment of the series. Great story Rick!
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Post by cam83 on Aug 10, 2005 20:17:59 GMT -5
The only thing I don't know about is Ev calling Agnes Mrs Carpenter. Agnes and Ev were friends/coworkers before in the 1960's so it's obvious they would have called each other by first names. I am sure, Mrs Carpenter WAS NOT that formal with Ev. Just a thought. But pretty well written.
My thoughts,
Cam
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Post by Ming on Aug 10, 2005 22:37:21 GMT -5
It is a great story,thank you Rick.
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Post by Rick Henry on Aug 11, 2005 1:15:15 GMT -5
The only thing I don't know about is Ev calling Agnes Mrs Carpenter. Agnes and Ev were friends/coworkers before in the 1960's so it's obvious they would have called each other by first names. I am sure, Mrs Carpenter WAS NOT that formal with Ev. Just a thought. But pretty well written. My thoughts, Cam True, though my story is only fictitious. I had Ev call her Mrs. Carpenter to add more drama to the events which unfolded. Mrs. Carpenter seemed to sound more dramatic than simply calling her Agnes. In this story Ev calling her Mrs. Carpenter is just setting the stage for further exploration into the unusual relationship Ev and Mom Carpenter have. Take note of when Karen and Agnes are arguing in the kitchen and Agnes motions Ev to leave the room. It's all part of setting up what will dig deeper into the dynamics of these two ladies.
This story will take some very unexpected turns in about Part 20 or so. |
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Post by cam83 on Aug 11, 2005 11:09:00 GMT -5
Yes, I believe they worked together...and Ev is still alive.
Cam
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Post by YesterdayOnceMore on Aug 11, 2005 13:11:21 GMT -5
 I'm lovin' it, Rick. Great new part to the story. I could picture it so clearly in my head. I could hear that grating voice of Agnes Carpenter attempting to tell Karen one more time just what she expected/wanted her to do. And, I could hear the anger in KC's voice, too, as she tried to exasperatedly tell her mother that she was making this decsion on her own. Great - just great. And, I like the fact that you've got Ev Wallace sort of having to call Agnes "Mrs. Carpenter." After all, we know t hat Agnes was quite the control freak - and as much as she didn't like unannounced guests, she would have demanded respect from her employees, and no matter if they were friends or not, I think she would have "winced" had Ev called her simply "Agnes" - especially in a ficticious world such as you've created, here. Kudos! Great story. Tim 
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Post by Rick Henry on Aug 11, 2005 22:31:33 GMT -5
Thank you friends for the kind words. Tim I believe you've got the idea of the plot I'm setting up here. Yes, I believe they worked together...and Ev is still alive. Cam How very interesting. I'd love to hear more about Ev and Mom Carpenters' early years together. |
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